A World Apart
By
David M. Brown
Demetrius makes his first mistake when he lets his best friend Halcyon marry Eleyna, the love of his life, without saying a word. On the day of the wedding, he walks away from the Elencheran town of Dove’s Meadow and joins the army.
He makes his second mistake when the pirate Black Iris tricks him into letting dozens of men, women and children die in a fire. Demetrius is imprisoned in grief and disgrace.
But he can atone. The Black Iris is dead. The Ivory Rose has risen to the top of the pirates and is leading brutal raids on the coast. If Demetrius can capture and kill her, he’ll win his pardon.
And then Demetrius discovers the Ivory Rose is Eleyna. He must decide which will be his third mistake: losing his last chance at a pardon or destroying the one woman he’s ever loved.
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My Review:
A World Apart is an excellent book. It is a story that covers four generations, who grew up in Doves Meadow. The majority of the story though, is about three friends, Demetrius, Eleyna and Halcyon. As kids they form their own gang and challenge each others skills. As teenagers Demetrius and Eleyna have discovered they love each other but cannot find the courage to tell each other. Due to miscommunication and misunderstanding, Eleyna agrees to marry Halcyon. The choices they made change the course of their lives forever. On the day of their marriage Demetrius leaves Dove’s Meadow to join the Order, the military government that runs Elenchera. Eleyna and Halcyon find themselves in a circumstance that brands them as outlaws, murderers. They flee for their lives and end up working on a pirate ship, which becomes their destiny. Due to a twist in fate, unbeknownst to Eleyna and Halcyon, they sidetrack Demetrius’s career, sentencing him to the Pit, a sewer infested hole with other thieves. This story has many twists and turns and some things you know are coming but you don’t know how or when. This is not a quick read, but it is a very interesting one. David M. Brown has created this whole other world, Elenchera and has done an excellent job of doing just that. I look forward to reading more by this author.
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Excerpt:
From Chapter 25: The Edge of the World (29631)
Pockets of swirling magic dust rose from the surface of the pink and violet water as it came into contact with the white beam that formed the perimeter of all Elenchera. The beam was not a perfect circle around the world, or a straight line, but led a jagged and uneven course, creating four distinct edges from four heavily defined promontories.
The west edge of Elenchera had been known to the earliest settlers in Gremilda – the magic dust that rose from the surrounding ocean gave the Gremildans the silver streaks in their hair and their glistening blue eyes – but one had to stand right by the edge to be truly close to magic.
A small island of rock overlooked the west edge, its surface blemished only by the presence of eight beautifully carved statues that stood on the outskirts of the island. Each one depicted a Gremildan of great distinction. The oldest was of a pioneer named Victor who had led the first successful crossing of the Raintops Mountains, opening the route into West Gremilda in the Second Shard. The most recent was of Moravia, a brilliant naval commander who had kept the island safe from invasion in the Ninth Shard.
The island by the west edge had long been considered sacred ground to the Gremildans. Only the Protectors and scientists were ever permitted to make the short crossing across the ocean to step foot on the island. The code had been broken by successful rebellions in the past but none more desecrating than the arrival of the Eligantian colonists. Many of the colonists had made the journey to the island but despite relentless pressure and persecution they had failed to yield the secrets of how to cast magic.
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AUTHOR INFORMATION:
David Brown could be considered a fantasy fanatic, especially since he has spent the last 10 years developing a 47,000-year history for his fictional world of Elenchera. When converting his obsession into literary form, David commits himself to a rigorous writing and editing process before his work can meet his approval. Combined with the critical eye of his wife and a BA Hons in History and English, David’s dedication leads him to his goal of inspiring readers through heartfelt stories and characters.
Although David is inspired primarily by fantasy fiction, he also finds his muse in the form of anime, world cinema, history, and biographies. His own books, Fezariu’s Epiphany and A World Apart, and the in-progress Ansel’s Remorse and The Stars Beneath the Parapets combine aspects from worlds both old and new into compelling tales of a world not soon forgotten. David himself certainly does not lack a spirit of adventure; in fact, he left his job in 2007 in order to spend a month travelling. Second only to meeting and marrying his wife, David counts this as one of the most amazing experiences of his life.
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LINKS:
Website – http://elenchera.com
Blog – http://tweeding.com
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I’m not always looking for a quick read, so this is ideal.
marypres(AT)gmail(DOT)com
Great review about the story.
bn100candg(at)hotmail(dot)com
Thank you for stopping by David. I enjoyed hosting you today. Best of luck with the rest of your book tour.
It’s really a great book, even if it does take some time to get to the point. I would have loved to see how Demetrius grew up and all his adventure and misfortunes and then found out about him being punished, but this might be a personal preference.
moonsurfer123 at gmail dot com
I’m loving this book so far, but I’m like 80 pages in, so I still don’t know what Demetrius has done to deserve the punishment of being banned or why he hasn’t seen his son.
I’m missing a map of this world, just to know where the places are. Is there one and my ereader is just not showing it?
(he has sometimes a problem with big pictures)
lennascloud(at)gmail(dot)com
Hallo David,
did you have to write it like that????
Don’t get me wrong I was suck in from the start but I’m just starting on the story and am already dreading the end. *fingers crossed for he lived happily ever after*
emiliana25(at)web(dot)de
It’s set in the same world as Fezariu’s Epiphany, right? I knew the name was familiar somehow, since I’ve read you book last year. So I’m guessing from the premise, Demetrius wont have it any easier than Fezariu?
galaschick78 at gmail dot com
Good review, thank you.
Great review and awesome excerpt.
Welcome to my blog David. I am thrilled to host you today. I absolutely loved your book. Not only is it interesting and well written but the ten years you put into creating the back story, wow. Very impressive. I wish you the best with this book, A World Apart.
Thank you so much, Maggie.
It’s a pleasure to be here and I have no doubt I will be returning to check out your posts in future.
Thank you again for your kind thoughts on A World Apart
Thank you for hosting me today, Maggie, and thank you for your wonderful review.
I am so pleased that you enjoyed A World Apart so much. Your feedback is very heart warming and the perfect way to begin the day.
Thank you so much
Thank you for hosting today.